In the recent mock presentation, there were a few aspects
that requires improvement and fine tuning. Firstly, the delivery of the
presentation needs improvement in terms of the way my team and I present the
contents and the body language we portray throughout. I felt my delivery could
be improved with less pauses to recall a particular point and I could be more
lively and enthusiastic. My team could also work on being more lively and
adopting a more friendly expression. The body language my team and I portrayed
was sometimes not ideal, and it is something that we have to iron out and
change, a better posture and hand gestures to emphasize a point or to point
towards a direction when necessary would be useful. I believe that our voice
and body language is the most important thing in a presentation, how we present
ourselves and communicate with the audience will directly affect the outcome of
the presentation.
Secondly the preparation for the presentation was
inadequate, as my team and I was not well rehearsed and lack being seamless.
The PowerPoint slides for the presentation was not well designed and could be
improved with tips from Garr Reynolds presentation tips such as,
limiting words and bullet points in the presentation slides. I believe that we
more rehearsals and fine tuning of the PowerPoint slides my team and I would be
able to execute the final presentation well.
In conclusion, the mock presentation did not turn out as
ideal as I imagined it to be, but in the process, I managed to find out what my
team and I are require to work on and focus before the final presentation.
Hi Ming Wei,
ReplyDeleteI believed that most of us were not ready for the mock presentation too including me as we were still modifying our slide content. I believe that you would do fine for the actual presentation as I've seen you presenting before with confidence. All the best!
Regards,
Kang Ming
Hi Ming Wei,
ReplyDeleteEven though the mock presentation did not turn out as ideal, it is a great experience to improve ourselves. Hope that with these experiences, we will be able to ace our presentation.
Best Wishes,
Zhong Han
Hi Ming Wei,
ReplyDeleteI believe you and your team have done your best hence do not be too dishearten. I am sure that through this experience, you are able to find out which aspects you can improve on.
Continue your effort and see you on 'stage'.
Yours Sincerely,
Benjamin